④ They haven’t enough time to go back home, leaving their old parents alone.

　　⑤ After retirement, most seniors have nothing to do, which adds to their loneliness.

　　⑥ For us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents no matter how busy we are.

　　⑦ Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the senior to help them lead a colorful life.

　　⑧ Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society.

　　【学生习作】

　　It is reported that up to 67% of the old people are suffering from metal diseases resulting from loneliness. This can attribute to several reasons.

　　One of them is that with the development of modern society, people in growing numbers are becoming busier and busier. As a result, they haven’t enough time to go back home, leaving their old parents alone. What’s more, after retirement, most seniors have nothing to do, which adds to their loneliness.

　　As far as I’m concerned, on one hand, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents no matter how busy we are. On the other hand, our society should organize all kinds of activities for the senior to help them lead a colorful life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society.

　　【教师点评】

　　该文层次分明、语言连贯，是一篇很有说服力的议论文。作者注重使用较高级的结构，如多次使用了精彩短语（下划线）、句型（斜体）和过渡词句（加粗）。人称和时态使用恰当，问题的分析到位，解决措施合情合理，反映出作者敏捷的思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。

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