weekends. They have two days off per week and spend enough time ①to sleep every day.
As a matter of fact, it's of great benefit to all the students. For one thing, it's good for students to build stronger and healthier bodies because it's very import for teenagers to grow up. For another, it helps studeents reduce pressure on study, which is ②benefit to their health and self-'confidence. Last but not least, all students have the same schedule, which provides them equal opportunity of study. In other words, the competititon among students that they are
③admited to universities will be fair.
1 hold the view that this regulation is good for students as well as teachers, which will contribute to a harmonious atmosphere of study in the long run.
【教师点评】
本篇习作结构比较好,内容充实,结构紧凑。
1.开篇点题做得很好,上下文衔接很自然,同时还运用了一些高级词汇、短语结构与重点语法点。本文最大的亮点在于多处使用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句。
2.文章在列举出台政策的意义时条理清晰,使读者看起来一目了然。
文章的不足之处在于多处出现了知识性错误如:①处应为短语spend time doingsth, ②处应为短语be benefical to ,③处的admit的过去分词应该双t加ed。 如此多的知识性错误给人感觉是作者的基功不够扎实,写作中应尽量避免这一点。
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