was sent by letter．I found myself often tell small lies．I

　　83．

　　wrote, “I’m

　　in Beijing．I enjoy the food selling at the

　　84．

　　university．And at the weekends, I often buy fried chickens 85．

　　or pork to eat．”

　　短:

　　76．a改为an

　　77．删去of

　　78．hard 改为hardly

　　79．mother 改为mother’s

　　80or改为and 81．have改为had

　　82．my前加about 83．tell改为telling

　　84．selling改为sold

　　85．chickens改为chicken

　　'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks．

　　Dear editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

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