成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练(6)附参考范文
A good face is a letter of recommendation Some people say beauty is just a skin deep. I don’t quite agree with them. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, competition, finding jobs and so on. Not only can good appearance help you become more confident, but also it helps you be impressed. If you want to get a good job,the first sight is important. Physical beauty is probable to draw much attention. However,we have to face this problem. We have no right to choose our appearance. When necessary,we can make up ourselves. If you think doing this is a good way to improve your confidence,just do what you really want to regardless ②others’ opinion. It is worth all the money and time. Facing a variety of social pressures,we young people should build confidence. Confidence is the key to success. In a word,you may not be the most beautiful one,but you can be the most attractive one;you may not the best one,but you can be the most confident one. Show yourself and chances will kiss you in time.
【点评】 爱美之心人皆有之。我们追求美,创造美,一副好脸孔就是一封介绍信,作者围绕这一主题进行阐述。在现代社会里,美丽的外表在社交、竞争、求职等方面有着不可低估的作用。作者立意大胆,构思巧妙,很有个性。文章叙述清楚,层次分明,过渡自然。在语言表达上,运用倒装句、排比句等句式,增强了文章的感染力。 文中语言错误有两处: probable改为likely。probable不能用某人或某物作主语,常用it作形式主语,构成it is probable for sb. to do sth.结构。 regardless之后加of。regardless of是复合介词,意为“不理会、不顾”。
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