论点表达也不够流畅。作者在第二段说考试结果不重要,而后又得出结论说国家需要更多受过良好教育的人。这两个观点都说得通,但表述时不能自相矛盾。
文章词数也不符合题目要求。至少应该写120个单词。高分作文秘诀之十:避免重复使用同一单词或短语。例如:
Instead of (不要说:)There are many people who speak English,so after learning English,you can communicate with them easily.
Use (要说:)There are many people who speak English,so after learning the language,you can communicate with them easily.
Instead of (不要说:)I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
Use (要说:)I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
Instead of (不要说:)In my hometown a new railway is being built and a power station is
going to be built next year.
Use (要说:)In my hometown a new railway is under construction and a power station is going to be built next year.
Instead of (不要说:)TV has a great influence on children and it also has a great influence on adults.
Use (要说:)TV has a great influence on children as well as on adults.假设你是李晓平,是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题,根据下面所给出的要点提示,用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。
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