⑥However，shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.⑦ The first disadvantage is that the consumers cannot see the goods or try them on in person.Sometimes，the real goods may not be the same as what have been seen on the computer.⑧ The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated，you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

　　【名师点评】

　　★①开篇引出话题，比较级的叠用表明网上购物的发展趋势。★②非限制性定语从句，增强句与句之间的连贯性。

　　★④⑤强调进一步网上购物方便的特点。★⑥从内容上转折，过渡到论述网上购物的缺点。★⑦⑧分别论述网购的缺点。★总体评价：文章结构清晰，层次分明，内容丰富真实。最后，若再加总结性语言，则文章更加完美。【写作指导】

　　Elegance(优雅)(原文)So­so(普通)

　　(1)Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages，of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.

　　Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages and one of them is perhaps its convenience.

　　(2)This is especially desirable to the old，the sick and the busy people who can’t go to the shops in person.

　　This is liked by old people，sick people and busy people because they can’t go to shops by themselves.

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