法表达清楚。尤其是最后一段,写得含糊不清。
作者也没有回答题目的要求,只是泛泛地讨论了问题而没有从个人的角度来分析。写作前要仔细阅读题目要求。高分作文秘诀之八:使用较复杂句式。例如:
Instead of (不要说:)She is a girl. She is 15 years old.
Use (要说:)She is a girl aged 15.
Instead of (不要说:)Last winter holiday I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandma.
Use (要说:)My father and I spent our last winter holiday in the countryside,visiting my grandma.
Instead of (不要说:)We hadn’t been there for many years and were greatly surprised at the changes.
Use (要说:)As we hadn’t been there for many years,we were greatly surprised at the changes./Not having been there for many years,we were greatly surprised at the changes.
Instead of (不要说:)I passed my driving test. This surprised my father.
Use (要说:)I passed my driving test,which surprised my father.
体会下列句子的句式结构:
1.We should try to make proper use of the computer,making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.
2.Absorbed in the games, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves,leaving their homework undone.宣传环保的方式很多,其中有漫画形式,有诗歌形式。两处方式各有特点。请你按照下列要点写一篇120词左右的英语短文:
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