2016年高考总复习优化英语课件（四川专用）写作教程：Module8_高考复习指南

2016年高考总复习优化英语课件（四川专用）写作教程：Module8

　　(2)使用概括性的名词代替具体的词. 如:“She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks.She intended to read all of them during the winter vacation.” 可以概括为:“She brought home a lot of books to read during the vacation.” (3)使用最短的连接词. 如:可以使用but, then, thus, yet, though;不能使用at the same time, in the first place, because of these, on the other hand等较长的连接词.通常,使用分号就能够达成使用连接词的效果. 5.不要加入自己的个人观点.如要求以读者的身份来概括,用第三人称来写,莫把作者的观点写成自己的观点.如要求以当事人的身份来写,则用第一人称. MODULE TASKS·模块任务为下面的文章写个summary American is the land of automobile.This country has only 6% of the world’s population but 46% of the world’s car.Right now, there are 97 million privately-owned cars consuming 75 billion gallons of gasoline and traveling an 1,000 billion miles a year. The figure also affirms something we know every time we refill our gasoline tank; the automobile is a very thirsty piece of technology.Of the total petroleum supply in the United States, 30 percent goes to quench that thirst.Every year for each passenger car, about 800 gallons of gasoline are consumed.Other aspects of our commitment to the automobile also bear mentioning here. It takes a great deal of energy to manufacture one automobile about 150 million BTU’s of energy.This is equivalent to 1,200 gallons of gasoline, enough to run a car for about 1,600 miles.We expend energy in the process of shipping cars from factories to showrooms, displaying them for sale and making replacement parts for repairs. One out of six jobs in the nation is associated with the automobile business. About two gallons of gasoline are consumed in the process of making every ten gallons that are pumped into an automobile’s gas tank. ________________________________________ ________________________________________ ________________________________________ One possible version: Summary: From the passage we learn that the USA has a large number of cars and each year a great deal of energy is consumed.The energy is used not only when driving cars but also when producing them.