3．审清图画的主题和梗概：一个年轻人在工厂，嘴里正吸着烟，这时他看到工厂里的一个禁止吸烟的标志牌，而工厂本身也正向大气中排放滚滚浓烟。年轻人顿时觉得困惑不解……由此，作者发表评论：相关部门应当采取措施禁止工厂污染自然环境的行为！

　　4．增加细节，连贯成文，做到层次分明，结构严谨，并准确选用相关词语、句型表达图画内容。

　　【参考范文】

　　Smoke

　　This is a funny and instructive picture. In the picture, a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means 揘o smoking?on t。年he wall. But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled, 揥hy does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke??eeNowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don't allow people smoking in the factory. However, they don't pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment.

　　In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories!

　　【范文点评】

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