2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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　　Dear Editor，

　　I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua.Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them.Using an iPad，we can listen to music，download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Apparently，it's helpful to our study，especially to our English listening.

　　Some students，however，bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones，which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed.Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.

　　In my opinion，as students，we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success.The classroom is a place for students to study，and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons.Furthermore，the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.

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