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Twoyearold Wang Yue died in a traffic accident near a market in Foshan without receiving timely help from truck drivers and passersby.This aroused the criticism for their indifference and cruelty and led to a heated discussion on punishing those who refuse to give help.
After reading the report,I feel really shocked.How can anyone be so coldhearted and turn a blind eye towards the victim?The passersby should be criticized for their indifference and the two drivers must be severely punished for their hitandrun behavior.
Had I happened to be there,I would have tried to do something helpful,like stopping the truck or the van hitting Yue Yue,calling 120 for an ambulance and asking others nearby to help get her parents.
To stop such tragedy from happening again,something must be done.First,the government should encourage people to help others in times of emergency and protect helpers so that anyone can offer assistance without any worries that the victims may sue them for compensation.Besides,parents should look after their young children responsibly.Last but not least,the media should spare no effort to praise those kindhearted people and give correct guidance to the public.
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