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I am honored to introduce a great armless pianist to you. He, Liu Wei, was chosen as one of the ten touching figures of 2011 in China, winning the Moving China Award.
Liu was born in 1987. He lost both his arms when he was ten after an accident. Two years later, he learned to swim and managed to take two gold medals in the National Paralyzed Swimming Championship at 14. Soon after that he was forced to give up swimming due to physical disease. At 19, he began to practice playing the piano by tapping keys with a set of toes. His efforts finally paid off. He became Champion of China's Got Talent in 2010 and gave a memorable performance in Vienna's Golden Saal concert hall in 2011.
I just can't believe one can play piano with toes, but Liu just made it. From him I knew deeply that if we try, we might get a chance at success. If we don't try, we will be bound to gain nothing.
Best wishes to you! I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
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