2016届牛津英语第二轮复习课件 (半)开放作文_高考复习指南

2016届牛津英语第二轮复习课件 (半)开放作文

　　湖南的写作命题既有别于北京和上海的开放作文，又有别于其他省份的情景作文，其开放程度介于他们中间。从近几年的湖南考题来看，都是给定了写作范围，但没有明确写作要点，给了考生较大的自由发挥空间。对于(半)开放作文，同学们写作时要注意以下事项。 1. 认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态； 2. 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应； 3. 注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者意识； 4. 要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑； 5. 要有主次之分，详略得当； 6. 要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑； 7. 要做到思想健康，积极向上。例：(2012·湖北卷)请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it. 注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； ②除诗歌外，文体不限； ③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； ④词数为120左右。思路点拨：文章仅给出一句提示句，是半开放式作文。写好该文，考生首先应认真审题，考题要求结合事例写作，故本文宜夹叙夹议，不可全写成议论文；在叙事时应注意用一般过去时。其次，应注意安排好文章结构。在遣词造句上，考生应多用一些高级词汇和高级句型，如定语从句、倒装结构、非谓语动词等，多用一些连词如： on the one hand, on the other hand, besides等，以提高文章的档次。【参考答案】 Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.