I was too frightened to know what to do. I anxiously ran to school to call my teacher for help. Hearing my cry, Mr.Zhang rushed over, telling us to phone 120 to call for doctors, and jumped into the lake to save Xiao Ming, who was struggling in the cold water. At last, he was saved and no sooner had doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital. It was not long before Xiao Ming”s parents came.They expressed their thanks to Mr.Zhang.
题二:
October 4,Sunday
Sunny
This morning, I was walking along the main street to the city park when I found heavy smoke pouring out of a building opposite the main road. Obviously, it was on fire. I called the firefighters.
Several minutes later, the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire. With their help, many people managed to get out of the building safe and sound. All of a sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry almost out of breath and shouted. But she couldn’t make herself understood. I went to the woman and asked her what was happening. She told me that her daughter was still trapped in the fire. I told the firefighters about it at once. They immediately ran into the building. Shortly afterwards, they rushed out with the little girl.
本文有如下的亮点:叙述完整,包括了所有的要点;语言简明生动,过渡自然,结构紧凑,行文流畅。本文使用了一些高级短语:on fire, safe and sound, all of a sudden, in a hurry,out of breath,be grateful to等;本文还使用了复合句和高级句型:I went to the woman and asked her what was happening (含有what的宾语从句);She told me that her daughter was still trapped in the fire (含有that的宾语从句);This morning, I was walking along the main street to the city park when I found heavy smoke pouring out of a building opposite the main road. (was/were doing+when+一般过去时: 某事正在进行,正在这时,发生了另一件事)
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