题三:
As is shown in the picture, a boy is shouting at his dad, who looks upset and doesn’t know what to do with his son. Their relationship seems difficult.
The picture reminds me of one of the problems that many families with teenagers face. Although it seems that the kid does not respect his dad, it is their communication that has gone wrong. A good relationship between a parent and a child requires much effort to make it strong. Open and frank communications help to ensure parents and their children stay close together.
So why don’t the dad and his son sit together, face to face, calm down and talk through their problems? This way, I believe that they will gradually have a positive relationship and become the father and son that we all really admire.
1. 本文结构合理、脉络清晰:作者首先描述图画中的内容,然后解释自己对这幅画的理解,把图片和生活结合起来,谈论图片的深层意义。
2. 使用了高级词汇和短语,如shout at, remind sb. of sth., face, respect, communication ,go wrong ,ensure, face to face, calm down等。
4. 使用了复合句,如As is shown in the picture(as引导的非限制性定语从句),who looks upset and doesn’t know what to do with his son(who引导的非限制性定语从句), Although it seems that the kid does not respect his dad (although引导的让步状语从句)等。
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