题六：

　　The City I Like Best

　　I have been to several other cities . Hangzhou is the one that I like best.

　　Hangzhou is a beautiful city. The West Lake with mountains all around is the prettiest part. It takes on a different look with the change of seasons. In spring, the path around the lake is lined with green trees and pink peach flowers. It fills me with strength and energy. In summer, sitting by the quiet and peaceful lake with green lotus leaves and white or pink lotus flowers everywhere helps me to forget all my worries. When I step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest. In winter, the trees and paths covered with white snow bring me a pure and noble feeling. The whole city is just like a big garden. No wonder it’s compared to the paradise on the earth. In addition , there are many places of interest worth visiting.

　　1. 这是一篇描写西湖的短文。西湖文明于世。作者抓住杭州的西湖这一主要景点，通过对春、夏、秋、冬西湖多变的景致的详尽描述，为读者展示了一副人间仙境，唤起了读者心中对西湖的赞叹。

　　2. 为了增强文章的表达力，作者多处使用了复杂句式。如：

　　① When I step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest.（含有when引导的时间状语从句的复合句）

　　② Hangzhou is the one that I like best.（含有that引导的定语从句）

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