2016届高考英语冲刺综合训练解析16_高考复习指南

2016届高考英语冲刺综合训练解析16

　　11~15分

　　第二档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

　　—漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。

　　—语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。

　　—有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

　　—较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

　　6~10分

　　第一档未完成试题规定的任务。

　　—明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

　　—语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

　　—较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。

　　—缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。

　　1~5分

　　0分 0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

　　四、One possible version

　　It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly.

　　Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much

　　time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my grandpa seemed to be happy about it, but as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so comfortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our community. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He became happy again.