所以, 句子复杂程度要服务于意思的清晰度。
2.句子结构复杂度服务于写作目的
下面的文章用简单句比较多, 20个句子中只有3个复合句, 复杂度为15%。
【样本1】 简单句多
I will never forget that special day I spent with my mother.Mother could only wear soft shoes after the operation.But her old ones were worn out.It was Mother’s Day.I bought my mother a pair of sport shoes with the money saved.
“Mum, I am back.” But I received no answer.It was quite unusual.I stepped into mother’s room, only to find her in bed.She was finally ill with heavy work, unable to hear me in her sweet dream...
I put aside the box and tiptoed into the kitchen.After some time, I put hot porridge beside her bed.Mother’s gray hairs spread on the pillow and shone in the
sunshine from the window.I began to comb her hair.I felt sour in my throat.Suddenly mother woke up and found what I was doing.
...
精心雕琢的简单句更符合叙述的过程, 周围的句子都是简单句, 形成一致的干脆叙事风格。
【样本2】 复合句多
“Mum,I am back.”But after I received no answer, which was quite unusual, I stepped into mother’s room, only to find her in bed, who was finally ill with heavy work, unable to hear me in her sweet dream...
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