福建省2012届高考英语二轮专题总复习课件：专题6 第3讲图画类_高考复习指南

福建省2012届高考英语二轮专题总复习课件：专题6 第3讲图画类

　　As can be seen in the picture, a sea is made up of many drops of water, and a forest consists of a lot of trees. Millions of persons make up the society. The picture tells us that a great number results from accumulation.

　　In our daily life, we can find many such examples. Everybody is born to this world knowing nothing. By learning the knowledge little by little, we become more knowledgeable. Now, we are graduating from the senior middle school. Every student in Senior 3 may have experienced many tests as well as many failures. After so many tests and failures, most of us feel our grades have improved gradually and we are more confident of our success in the college entrance examinations.

　　In a word, nobody can be successful overnight. As an English proverb goes, Rome is not built in one day. We must work hard if we want to succeed. Only through our persistent efforts and diligence can we realize our great dream.

　　【作文点评】

　　本文定为五档，得分24分。文章很好地完成了试题规定的任务：首先作者描述了图画内容，点明主题：积少成多。第二段作者联系现实，举了两个例子来进一点论述这个哲理。第三段作者谈到了自己的感受，认为我们要想取得成功，就必须付出努力，呼应了前文，深化了主题。本文层次清楚，脉络清晰，要点表达完整，表达方式灵活多样，如，表达“由……组成”时作者使用了三个不同的短语：be made up of, consist of, make up，避免了用词上的单调重复。【作文点评】英语谚语“Rome is not built in one day”的使用恰到好处，增加了文章的说服力和逻辑性。倒装句(Only through our persistent efforts and diligence can we realize our great dream.)、定语从句(As an English proverb goes)及条件状语从句(We must work hard if we want to succeed)的运用不仅增添了文章的表现力，而且还让读者读起来朗朗上口。本文不愧为一篇上乘之作。