Dear Editor­in­Chief，

　　Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_ Mirror!

　　I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world­famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

　　As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Hua 【作文点评】

　　文章要点齐全，写作层次清楚，时态、语态正确，较好地完成了写作任务。作者能紧扣要点框架适当地增加细节，文中衔接词语，如first, equally, and, as a young student等的使用使文章前后连贯，承接自然。倒装句(Equally attractive are the success stories of world­famous people)，非限定性定语从句(which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place)及虚拟语气(that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning)等复杂句式的使用也给文章增色不少。

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