注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.“申请陈述”的第一句已经给出,不计入总词数。
Name(姓名) Li Hua Sex(性别) F/M Age(年龄) 18 Email Add.(电子邮件地址) lihua@xinhuaschool.com Statement of Application(申请陈述) I am a student from Xinhua Middle School in Chongqing,China. __________________________________ 【精彩美文】
I'm a student from Xinhua Middle School in Chongqing, China. And I'm very much interested in speaking for animals. You know I'm warmhearted and have always been caring for animals.
I would like to speak for dogs. It is not only because dogs are my favorite animals, but also dogs are not treated properly. Devoted though dogs are to us human beings, we seldom think about what they need and care. We just order them to do this or that, but hardly are we aware what we can do for them. In my
opinion, it is high time we did something for our closest animal friends and lived a harmonious life with them.
Strongly hoping to be accepted to speak for animals.
【全品点睛】
①行文逻辑:表明意向,说明优势→选择动物、说明理由→希望申请成功。较好地使用了连接词,如:and,not only…but also,though,but等。
②词汇短语:运用了较高难度的词汇。如:warmhearted,care for,devoted, properly,be aware 等。 ③句式句法:运用了多样化的句式结构。如:表语从句:…not only because dogs are my favorite animals, but also dogs are not treated properly. 倒装句、宾语从句:Devoted though dogs are to us human beings, we seldom think about what they need and care. 虚拟语气:it is high time we did something… 同时,非谓语动词结构的使用也为文章增色不少,如:to be accepted to speak。
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