(4)个人见解:进一步采取措施来拯救动物,以利于人类生活
2. 将以上信息用英语句子表达出来,注意表达的准确性,要选用丰富的词汇和结构稍复杂的句子,提高文章的质量。例如:
(1)Unplanned cutting trees and many fires caused the decrease of the forest, making many animals lose their homes to live in.
初稿:
Recently, a survey has been done to find out how nature was destroyed in some area and I find a lot of animals are in danger. There are two reasons for this. On the
2. 表达中存在的错误和不足:
(1)在On the one hand, unplanned cut trees and many fires caused the de-crease of the forest, making many animals lose their homes to live.一句中,主语unplanned cut trees应该改为动名词短语unplanned cut-ting trees;句末的动词不定式to live修饰homes,缺少介词in。
(2)文章末尾的倒装句用得很好,但两个句子之间的连接出现了错误:Only in this way can we save nature and animals, it is of great value to human beings.第二个分句建议改成非限定性定语从句:Only in this way can we save nature and animals, which is of great value to human beings.
(3)语句和段落间的衔接有待改进。如第一段中第一句话中"and"前后两部分过渡不够自然;此外两个段落之间的衔接不够紧凑。
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