⑧The government has taken some measures to push back high-school starting times.
⑨It is important to form a good habit of going to bed early.
⑩Let’s make sure that we all have sufficient sleep.
There is evidence to show that lack of sufficient sleep appears to put adolescents at risk for difficulties in school, including sleepiness in class and poor concentration. In addition, this would have negative effects on their body development and health.
Fortunately, the government has taken some measures to push back high-school starting times. As for us teenagers, it is important to form a good habit of going to bed early. Let’s make sure that we all have sufficient sleep.
【教师点评】
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实例指导4—Keep a Happy Heart
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