1. 初稿的优点:对文章的要点把握比较准确,文章的体裁及格式准确。
2. 不足之处在于文章的第一段和最后一段过于简单,因此难以激起读者了解北京的兴趣。
3. 在第二段的要点陈述中所运用的都是简单句,句型单调不够灵活,要点转换尤显生硬。
1. 首尾呼应,画龙点睛。第一段提出了"Have you been to China? Have you been to Beijing?"的问题。而最后一段对文章概括之后,用一句"I’m sure you will enjoy them all."和第一段遥相呼应,使整篇文章给读者以浑然一体之感。
2. 作者分三段来分别描写三个景点,层次分明,一目了然。
3. 更难能可贵的是使用了较为复杂的句型,例如定语从句和状语从句,并且逻辑关系表达准确。
Powerful Sentences:
1. I still remember my first trip to Beijing last year as if it were yesterday.
2. People in Beijing like morning markets, where they can get many kinds of delicious foods.
3. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners want to find out more about Beijing.
4. It is a dream for me to visit Beijing.
5. The Great Wall is actually over 6,000 kilometers long, 6 to 7 meters tall and 4 to 5 meters wide.
6. Every year many visitors from all over the world come to China to visit Beijing.
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