其次,文章里的一些过渡做得不太好。如:第一、第二两句间过渡太仓促,如果改为:However, recently some people have said ..., 就很好了。      然后,第三句话I totally against this point of view应该是I am totally against this pressure on the Earth. Secondly, people will know more about outer space and learn Earth better by studying other planets. Finally, space exploration will help us find more solutions to Earth’s pollution problems.

　　In a word, exploring outer space should be encouraged and is worth the time and money we spend on it.

　　Powerful sentences:

　　1. Exploration of outer space not only helps us know more about the universe, but also helps us know our own home —Earth better.

　　2. Exploration is important to human beings. When the Earth is no longer fit for people to live, the exploration of outer space will help us find another home in the universe.

　　3. Earth is our home. Without it, none of us would survive, so we should spend most of our money protecting it.

　　实例指导6--北京欢迎你

　　写作任务:

　　假如你的学校正在举行一场英语演讲比赛,请你拟一篇关于"北京欢迎你"的演讲稿,向外国友人介绍长城,天安门广场,和颐和园三个景点。并邀请外国友人来北京旅游。(词数:不少于120)

　　写作分析:

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