爱好 音乐、集邮、足球、旅游等
写作分析:
1. 本次写作任务是根据表格内容写一篇自我介绍的文章,重点介绍个人兴趣爱好,属于记叙文。时态以现在时为主。
2. 本文写作难点在于合理安排文章结构。因为需要写的要点较多,所以要做到条理清晰、层次分明。短文可分为三段,第一段介绍基本情况及写这篇短文的目的;第二段包括性格、特长、爱好等方面的内容,是写作重点,注意不要逐条翻译;第三段为结束段,表达想找朋友分享快乐的愿望。
3. 短文要着重介绍自己的兴趣爱好,因此要注意词语和句型的变换。
初稿:
My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl. I’m in Grade 1 in a senior middle school. I like English and have many kinds of hobbies. So, I would like to find a pen pal to practice English. And we may share the feelings on hobbies.
My character is humorous. And I抦 get-ting on well with my clarssmates. After school, we often play football together. I抦 also interested in traveling, which can increase my knowledge and make me stronger. To be more important, I have made many friends by traveling. Besides, I抦 interested in music, especially pop mulasic. Above all,
成稿:
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl in Senior Grade 1. Being humorous and always ready to help, I get on well with my class-mates. English is my favorite subject, so I’d like to find a pen pal to practice English. We may, at the same time, share our feelings about hobbies. I have many different kinds of hobbies.
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