Welcome to China! Welcome to our school. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
这篇习作所使用的词汇和语法结构基本准确,能满足写作任务的要求,基本达到写作目的。 不足之处在于:
1.行文安排布置不流畅。开头未点明Bob来中国的目的是为了学习,所以后文介绍中国中学生的学习状况略显突兀。
2. 文章只是单纯地描述了两种学校生活,没有突出重点。因此也就没有很好地达到帮助朋友消除忧虑的目的。
成稿:
Dear Bob,
I’ve received your letter, and I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China to study.
What you heard in the past about our schooling is true. We used to have a lot of homework every day, even on weekends and vacations. Having endless exams was another characteristic of our school.
However, now we have mastered studying, and our school life is getting more and more colorful and interesting. In class, we are active in discussing and solving problems. Sometimes one of the students is asked to teach other students. I love this kind of teaching method —it makes me feel I am a great student. After class, we enjoy a variety of activities, such as dancing, making speeches, and joining in English Corner. As far as I know, everyone is happy with their lives in our school.
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