总之,此文符合邀请信的要求,达到了题目所要求的写作目的,不失为一篇佳作。短文将运动会时间、地点等情况表达得很清楚,但作为邀请信还有以下几点不足:

　　1. 作为邀请信的开头,没有开门见山写清写信的目的,给目标读者一种"一头雾水"之感。

　　2. 文中"Please come on and join us." "Be sure to come. Don’t let me down."等句的表达使语气显得过于生硬。

　　【佳句欣赏】

　　1. We would like you to join us.

　　2. It will be a lot of fun if you come with us tonight.

　　3. We hope you can spare some time to come.

　　4. I will call you on Friday morning to make sure that you are coming.

　　【范文欣赏】

　　Dear Peter,

　　I am writing to invite you to take part in the teachers’ events at the sports meet at our school. The sports meet will be held on April 29th at our school. The opening ceremony will begin at 8:00 in the morning. The sports meet will include track and field events for students, such as the high jump and the long jump.

　　There will also be some games for teachers, such as the 4×100 relay race and running with a ball. It will be a lot of fun. I hope you are interested in the teachers’ events and we are all looking forward to your coming. Thank you and I will call you tomorrow.

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