2. 存在的问题有:第一,论证并不十分有力,只是说出个人看法,并没有足够的事例来支撑作者的观点。第二,论证时条理还不够清晰。加上一些必要的关联词就可以解决这个问题。第三,文字和语言的处理还可以更加丰富,使作文更加出彩。

　　成稿:

　　Patriotic films have greatly influenced several generations of our Chinese. Numerous people are inspired by the courage and wisdom of our revolutionists and soldiers. However, to some students those films are less attractive than the exciting Hollywood films, for there are no handsome actors or romantic love stories.

　　I cannot agree with those students on that. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, in comparison with foreign films, the Chinese patriotic films tell us the real touching and inspiring stories that happened in China years ago. From their stories, we know our happiness today owes to all their efforts and struggle. Secondly, a number of them are also great works, for example, Zhang Gathe Soldier Boy. We should get rid of the idea that patriotic films mean dull and boring.

　　In conclusion, I want to say, the outstanding patriotic films are also the record of the Chinese history. We students should not only watch them but also love them.

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　　Powerful sentences:

　　1. The patriotic films are also the great works of the senior Chinese film artists. We should show respect for them.

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