【教师点评】

　　1．亮点点击：这篇习作紧扣题目要求，有论点，有论据，较好地完成了写作要求规定的任务，使用了比较高级的句子如：Besides，learning Englishcan help the Chinese people communicate with people in other countries more easily .显示了小作者不错的语言功底。

　　2．误点点拨：语言错误影响了文章质量：①处spreaded应改为spread，动词spread的过去时、过去分词都是spread②处agree后应力加wlth；③处percents应改为percent。

　　3．画龙点睛：China is opening to the outside world. English is very important; It can't be replaced by Chinese.这几个句子太散了，可以合成一个句子：Since China is openlng to the outside wotld，English is very important to China and it can't be replaced by Chinese．这样就通顺多了；About 70 percent of the artlcles are published in English．前边应该加上For example, For instance，使之更好地与上一句衔接。

　　【参考范文】

　　It is reported that Chinese is being taught in many countries in the world now, which means the influence of Chinese is growing. So some people say it is not necessary for the Chinese students to learn English any more. But I don't agree with these people because English is still the most widely used language in the world nowadays. For instance, about 70 percent of the articles in the world today are published in English, which suggests that English can't be replaced by Chinese and other languages. On the other hand, learning English will help us to communicate with

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