2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.4_高考复习指南

2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.4

　　第4讲漫画开放类【典例】(2015·福建高考) 请阅读下面图画, 按要求用英语写一篇短文。

　　内容要求: 1. 描述画面; 2. 概述其含义; 3. 谈谈个人感想。

　　凿壁偷光注意: 1. 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数;

　　2. 可适当发挥, 使文章内容充实、行文连贯;

　　3. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇: 凿, 钻bore In the picture, _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题思路】第一步: 依体裁谋篇章　结构对　第一关内　容描述图画“凿壁偷光” 段　落第一段描述图画; 第二段阐述图画的含义; 第三段谈个人感想第二步: 列要点选句式　要点全　及格线要点一: 描述图画含义__________________________________________ _______________________ 要点二: 剖析图画内涵__________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ ______________________________ 要点三: 谈个人感想____________________________________________ ________ In the picture, we can see a boy, who was reading a book with full attention. The moral of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning. 第三步: 扣主题拓展句　句式美　优秀分要点一拓展: 添加孩子衣着以及读书环境 ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ________ In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, who was reading a book with full attention. He was sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it and a weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall. 要点二拓展: 添加故事的来源以及凿壁偷光的原因 __________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________ This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. 要点三拓展: 进一步强调故事的寓意以及收获 __________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ___________________________________ It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future. 【现场阅卷·作文升格】学　生　答　卷我　来　阅　卷该生习作为三档作文, 得分为14分。三段式的写作结构很好, 清晰了然; 原文词数略少, 只有81词; 句型单一, 简单句比重太高; 文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑, 结构缺少组织。