1. 第一句read应改为reading, 谓语动词错误, 此处是看到小男孩正在读书, 故用现在分词作宾语补足语。 2. 第三句He is really work hard应改为He is really working hard, 谓语动词错误, is和work都是谓语动词不能连用, 故把work改为现在分词形式构成现在进行时态。 3. 第四句Nowdays应改为Nowadays, 拼写错误。 4. 第五句resulting in应改为so that, 连词错误, resulting in不能直接跟从句。 5. 第八句use前添加you, if引导从句缺主语; succeed改为success, 此处成分为宾语, 应用名词形式。 五　档　作　文 In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, who was reading a book with full attention. He was sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it and a weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall.

　　This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

　　Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

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