2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.1_高考复习指南

2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.1

　　专题六　书面表达第1讲　书信邮件类【典例】(2016·浙江高考)

　　学校图书馆需要购置一批新书, 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越, 你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个词的信, 推荐这两类书, 并分别说明推荐理由。注意: 信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。 Dear Mr Wang,

　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,

　　Li Yue 【解题思路】第一步: 依体裁谋篇章　结构对第一关这是一篇书信类文章, 短文的四部分应为: 第一段说明写信的目的; 第二段阐明推荐科普类图书的原因; 第三段阐明推荐文学类图书的原因;

　　第四段表达期待。第二步: 列要点选句式　要点全及格线要点一: 我想提一些建议。____________________________ 要点二: 我们最需要的是科普类图书。____________________________ ____________ I’d like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. 要点三: 除了通过阅读获取知识外, 我们应该读一些文学书去获得乐趣和灵感。 __________________________________________________________ _____________________ 要点四: 如果你能考虑我的推荐, 我不胜感激。 _____________________________________________________ In addition to reading for knowledge, we should read literary books for fun and inspiration. I would appreciate it if you can consider my recommendation. 第三步: 扣主题拓展句　句式美优秀分要点一拓展: 了解到我们学校将购买图书, 我想提一些建议。(用know 现在分词形式作原因状语) ____________________________________________________________ _______________ 要点二拓展: 添加推荐原因　__________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Knowing that our school library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. 要点三拓展: 添加推荐原因　___________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ___________________________ In addition to reading for knowledge, we should read literary books for fun and inspiration. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. 【现场阅卷·作文升格】学　生　答　卷我　来　阅　卷该生习作为四档作文, 得分为18分。能覆盖所有内容要点; 大部分句子基本正确, 可以适当增加复合句的使用; 衔接成分太少, 可以适当添加一些过渡词。 1. 第二句call应改为called, 非谓语动词错误, 此处student和call之间存在被动关系, 故用called。 2. 第四句advices应改为advice, 名词单复数错误, advice为不可数名词, 故不能用复数形式。 3. 第七句和第八句可以合并成一个含有定语从句的复合句: Literary books can also be bought, which have many beautiful sentences and can improve our reading skills.