达到了预期的写作目的。
15分—17分
第三档 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
·覆盖了内容要点:
·运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求;
·语法和用词方面有一些错误,但不影响理解。
基本达到了预期的写作目的。
12分—14分
第四档 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
·漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容;
·所用句式和词汇有限;
·语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。
未能清楚地传达信息。
6分—11分
第五档 未完成试题规定的任务。
·明显遗漏主要内容;
·句式单调、词汇贫乏;
·语法或用词方面错误较多,严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
1分—5分
0分 未能传达任何信息;所写内容与要求无关。
四、Possible versions:
Possible version 1:
Last Friday, on the way home from school, I found a dirty puppy dog lying beside the dustbin. He was so weak that he couldn't open his eyes. I felt sorry for the puppy and carried him home immediately. After feeding him food and milk, I gave him a shower. I was so glad to see the dog recover. He was so lovely and I wanted to keep him. After discussing the situation with my parents, I decided to adopt him. Today the dog has become part of our family. We walk him in the park, play with him and take good care of him. He brings us happiness and keeps us company.
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