假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for

　　everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Please give me some advices.

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　【参考答案】5.

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

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