2016届广西柳江高考英语二轮复习短文改错实效训练（2）_高考复习指南

2016届广西柳江高考英语二轮复习短文改错实效训练（2）

　　5．with→without　根据句意，应是“没有手机，学生将能集中注意力上课”。故with改为without。

　　6．message→messages　message是可数名词，前没有限定词，应用复数形式，故message改为messages。

　　7．the others前的the去掉　与前文的some对应，用others，故去掉the。

　　8．at→in　in the age of information“在信息时代”，故应将at改为in。

　　9．spoken→speaking　personally speaking“在我看来”。故spoken改为speaking。

　　10．more→rather　rather than而不是。

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!