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参考答案: 2.①The story itself doesn’t count,but what is reflected in the story does. ②Not the story itself but what is reflected in the story counts. ③It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. 参考范文:
In the picture,we can see a boy in ①worn clothes,②sitting at a ①shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he ③was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy,②being poor,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night.The moral of the story is: ③spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily ④no matter how difficult the situation may be.
Of course,things are totally different today.④It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work ③pays off.We should ③take pains to improve ourselves through learning and ③get prepared for the future. 名师点评:本文主题突出,要点齐全,结构紧凑,段落清晰,层次分明,行文连贯,用词准确,句式多变,语言生动,不失为一篇优秀范文。 ①用词精准,并多变换,如worn clothes中的worn和shabby wooden table中的shabby;②非谓语动词特别是动词-ing形式的运用显示出了作者良好的语言基本功;③大量短语的使用增加了语言的感染力,提升了表达档次,增加了得分亮点,如be absorbed in,spare no effort,pay off,take pains to do sth.,get prepared for等;④让步状语从句和强调句型的使用提升了句式的难度和档次,表明了作者娴熟驾驭高级句式的能力。 【典例2】 图表类
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