At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　答案：

　　My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do

　　special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the

　　biscuits in the world，so I

　　to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic

　　of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor

　　I was packing them up.

　　At

　　party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just

　　get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me

　　the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　解析：

　　第一处：去掉in　用last，next等表示的时间状语前不用介词，故去掉in。

　　第二处：anything→something　anything用于疑问句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故将anything改为something。

　　第三处：better→best　表示比较的范围是in the world，故改为最高级。

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