第五处：many→much　此处说的是在卡拉OK唱歌这件事让作者花费了很多钱，浪费了很多时间。many指代可数名词，much指代不可数名词。故将many改为much。

　　第六处：so→but　逗号前说不想再去了，而后面又说害怕失去友谊，由此可知逗号前后为转折关系，而非因果关系。故将so改为but。

　　第七处：How→What　该句中do you think为插入语，分析句子成分可知动词do后缺少宾语，而how为疑问副词，在句中作方式状语，作宾语应用what。

　　第八处：are→were　根据下文的would可知此处为if条件句的虚拟语气。与现在事实相反，应用一般过去时。故将are改成were。

　　第九处：him→them　上文提到作者交了三个朋友，再结合上文中的their friendship可知此处指代那三个朋友，为复数。故将him改为them。

　　第十处：去掉with　固定搭配help sb. with sth.意为“帮助某人某事”，help后宾语为人时不用介词。故去掉with。

　　(四)

　　(2015·浙江)

　　My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left­hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.

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