2016届高考英语二轮复习课件：书面表达七 1_高考复习指南

2016届高考英语二轮复习课件：书面表达七 1

　　In a word，you are welcome to our school. And I hope you can adapt to the new surroundings soon. You are also expected to tell us the culture about your country and help us improve our English. Looking forward to your coming. Yours,

　　Li Jin 强化训练（点此链接）易错防范未能有效整合信息，忽视上下文连接假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。 ◇上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等)； ◇中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等)； ◇下午与我校学生游览海河。

　　注意： 1．词数不少于100； 2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：海河the Haihe River Dear Mr. Smith， I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang HighSchool.____________________________________ __________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua 错因分析：该写作要求中列举的内容要点多而且散。考生若不能有效整合信息，划分文章结构，并合理地进行发挥和想象，写出的文章就缺乏逻辑性，平铺直叙。因此考生在构思过程中应进行适当发挥。此外，需要用适当的过渡性词语进行衔接。这样才会使文章结构紧凑，语言连贯，富于逻辑性。答案： Dear Mr. Smith， I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26.I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.In the morning, there will be a forum in the school auditorium, where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other, talking about school life and cultural differences.