2016届高考英语二轮复习课件：书面表达七 2_高考复习指南

2016届高考英语二轮复习课件：书面表达七 2

　　I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully Li Hua Writing 2 (2017·北京) 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意：1.词数不少于60。 2．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意与点拨：这篇情景作文主要涉及四个要点。在写作时要以时间为主线，事件为辅助，写清事件的过程。项目内容 “三定” 体裁：记叙文　时态：一般过去时　人称：第一人称为主确定要点 ①点明问题(There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. ) ②讨论问题(My classmates and I had a discussion and...) ③提交建议(We went to meet the schoolmaster to report it. ) ④看到变化(He accepted our suggestions. Now it's easy to park our bikes.) 答案： There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our suggestions.Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened for us to the parking place.Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there. 强化训练（点此链接）易错防范要点残缺，一盘散沙作为社区的志愿者，你与同班的几名同学每隔一周的星期六就会到学校附近的儿童福利院，为暂时无法回家的儿童做一些力所能及的事情。请根据提示及图画内容为学校的墙报写一篇报道。