高三英语二轮三轮总复习重点突破第五讲描述加评论，突破开放式作文课件（人教版）_高考复习指南

高三英语二轮三轮总复习重点突破第五讲描述加评论，突破开放式作文课件（人教版）

　　[例1] (2010·北京高考)请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

　　In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you

　　understand it. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________

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　　In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.

　　[高分缘由] (1)文章一开始便使用了一个完全倒装句，使之非常醒目。 (2)文章多处运用非谓语动词。如struggling为现在分词作伴随状语，to get more sunshine作目的状语，faced with difficulties作时间状语。 (3)文章使用了较多的复合句。如who succeed in unfavorable

　　condition为定语从句修饰those，if引导的条件状语从句；特别是文章的结尾连续用了两个从句，we want为定语从句， as the tree in the picture does为状语从句。 1．对于开放式看图作文，首先应该描述画面的内容。在描述时，无需掺杂议论、情绪或评价，同时注意描述要有主次之分，详略得当。 2．在充分理解了图画及其内在含义之后，我们就可以确定要点，并按前面的提示开始叙述。写作时可以分为三部分，开始是：From the picture we can see that...；然后讲述其寓意：I think the picture is trying to tell us that...；最后进行总结。 3．掌握一些常用经典句型： (1)第一部分阐述图画中的内容与主题。经常用到的句型有： As is shown in the picture... As we can see in the picture... In the picture we can see that... From the picture I can see... What an interesting picture! (2)第二部分结合考生的生活或学习实际，阐明图画的寓意及其对我们生活的启示，常用到的句型有： The picture is trying to tell us that... The picture reflects a common social problem... The picture vividly shows... The picture conveys a message that... I think the picture wants to show us that... From the picture, we can draw a conclusion that... As the picture suggests... This picture makes me think a lot about... It reminds me of...