Jinmao Tower is one of Shanghai’s most well­known symbols.You can’t7 really

　　shouldn’t miss a chance to visit it.We can have8 There is a good view of Shanghai from the

　　88th floor in_the Tower9.On January 1st，the Shanghai’s New Year concert by_which_Shanghai welcomes the new year10 was held in a new11 great new structure，the Shanghai Arts Center.12 It’s located in Pudong and looks just like a beautiful butterfly.In

　　the evening，the colourful lights on its roof will shine14 with the music playing15 as the music plays.I think you’ll like it.And in16 during your 7 day seven­day17 journey visit，I hope you’ll have a special day at last We’ll when we visit the Yu Garden，where the Shanghai’s traditional customs and culture can be seen.The food there is very really18

　　dilicoius delicious.

　　Hope you’ll come soon.19 I can’t wait to take you around and have a good time in

　　Shanghai.

　　Yours sinecerly20sincerely

　　Lin Hong

　　,旁　批

　　1．标点符号使用不当。应该用逗号。现在，一般商业信件中，除了信的主体之外都省去标点。

　　2．人名的首字母一定要大写。

　　3．谈论将来的安排时应该用现在进行时态，不要用will。

　　4．用这个词更准确。

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