(2)可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
I am a 16-year-old girl by the name of Wang Shan, and I'm currently studying in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
My interests include music, and photography, and I believe that communication is the most essential skill and have developed the ability of for communication. My biggest strength is my ability to communicate with others, and I can speak both Chinese and English fluently, and am good at speaking even with those who are shy and withdrawn.
I look forward to a world of beautiful nature and peace, and I think the most meaningful topic in the world will be war, and dealing with racial discrimination, starvation and protecting the environment.
①全文要点齐全,涵盖了题目所要求的个人简介的重要信息;文章层次分明,以姓名→身份→爱好→细节表露→参营目的为顺序,一个兴趣广泛、热爱和平的女孩跃然纸上。②第3段“I think the most meaningful topic in the world will be war, and dealing with... ” 显示了作者着眼看世界的宽阔视野。③语言运用灵活,首段中“by the name of ”及currently的恰当运用,摆脱了常规表达模式,较有新意,另外文中essential, look forward to, based on等词与短语的使用,显示了良好的语言功底。
My aim for this year's summer camp is to make friends and learn more about foreign culture and customs. I wish to be reviewed for acceptance to this year's summer camp based on my motivation, skills and personality.
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