4.there are too many commercials.Besides,most programs on TV are also available elsewhere. More and more teenagers spend twice as much time in front of the TV 5.as playing outside,which is harmful to their health.
As 6.for cells and the Web,they are more necessary to me.I need 7.a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family,8.and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet. (139 words) 【名师点评】 本文要点全面,说理透彻,逻辑严密,自由发挥充分得体,有着较强的说服力和感染力。写作所采用的句式结构合理且多样,现将其写作上的亮点陈述如下 : 1. 句型结构亮点。 (1)定语从句的运用。如:We are now living in an information age,in which TV,cells and the Web are widely used. (2)名词性从句的运用。如:It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them. (3)状语从句的运用。如:I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy,and there're too many commercials. (4)虚拟语气的合理运用。如:However,if I had to give up one of them,I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. 2.高级词汇的使用,如:available 等。 3.布局谋篇亮点。第一段总起,第二段表明在电视﹑手机和网络中,宁愿放弃“电视”的理由,第三段说明“手机”和“网络”对我的意义。全文层次脉络清晰﹑布局合理。 【疯狂背诵】 请用10分钟背诵范文 【还原范文】 请将下列句子翻译成英语 1.电视、手机和网络,你愿意放弃哪一个?(题目) Which would you give up: TV,cell,or web? 2.我们现在正生活在一个信息时代,电视、手机和网络广泛使用。 We are now living in an information age,in which TV,cells and the Web are widely used. 3.似乎许多人没有了它们开心不起来。 It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them. 4.然而,如果我不得不放弃它们中之一,我将会关掉电视而不是关掉手机或者断开网络。 However,if I had to give up one of them,I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. 5.没有电视我可以做到,因为几乎没有节目合我的口味,商业广告太多。 I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there are too many commercials. 6.而且,大多数的电视节目在其他地方也可以看到。 Besides,most programs on TV are also available elsewhere. 7.越来越多的青少年在电视机前花费的时间比在外面玩的时间多一倍,这对他们的健康是有害的。 More and more teenagers spend twice as much time in front of the TV as playing outside,which is harmful to their health. 8.至于手机和网络,它们对我而言更加必要。 As for cells and the Web,they are more necessary to me. 9.我需要手机来和我的朋友和家人保持联系,且几乎所有的信息都能在因特网上找得到。 I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.
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