[习作点评]
假定你叫李华,是学生会外联部的干事。最近你们学校有美国学生来访。请你根据以下信息以发言稿的形式用英语介绍学校的周边服务设施。要求词数:120~150。
1.学校北边有餐馆、超市、邮局和银行。步行十分钟就到。
2.营业时间:全天24小时服务。
3.校门口的7路公交车直达医院,两站地。也可以拨打紧急电话120。
Hello, everyone,
My name is Li Hua. Welcome to our school. As a member of the Student Union, it is a great honor for me to be your guide. For your convenient, I would like to tell you something about the surroundings around our school. 【为了方便,在介词后应该使用convenience;附属设施应该使用facilities,而非surroundings。】
There is a restaurant, a supermarket, a post office and a bank which is just situated on the north of the school, all_are_within ten minutes' walk. 【此处最好使用独立主格结构,去掉are。】All of them are opened 24 hours a day, as a result, you can go there any time of the day. 【表示“开放的状态”,使用“be open”。】What's more, we are quite close to a hospital and if any of you falls ill, the No. 7 bus stops at the school gate may be the quickest way there—just two stops from the school.
【此处使用定语从句添加关系词which或者现在分词短语stopping at...作定语。】Alternatively, you can dial 120 if it is in_hurries. 【“遇到紧急情况”应该使用“in emergencies”。】Hoping you a happy stay here. Thank you! 【表示祝愿使用wish sb. sth.。】
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