I went to school as usual this morning, trying to stay calm. The first two classes seemed so slow as I was a little upset and absent­minded. During the break, my Math teacher asked me to his office. I was very uneasy because I didn't know what I had done wrong. Unexpectedly, my teacher showed me my iphone the moment he saw me standing before him.

　　Overjoyed, I grasped it back quickly. It turned out that the driver of the bus I often take saw the picture of me on my iphone screen. Knowing that I was a student of this school, he sent it to our reception office.

　　There is no happiness which is better than that acquired by getting back what has been lost. Moreover, I am greatly moved by what the driver did for me. Ordinary as he is, he is indeed a worthy man and respectable. The event will always remind me to be kind and helpful.

　　【作文点评】

　　本文由问句Oh, my God! Where is my iphone? 引入话题，吸引读者的注意。然后直接点明话题“我的手机掉了”。接着第二段完整地描写了其经过和失而复得的全部过程。最后一段谈到了作者自己的感受。本文要点齐全，很好地完成了写作任务。尤其是文章中用一些形容词巧妙地表达了作者态度的转变： sad, uneasy, overjoyed, moved, kind and helpful。文章多处使用各种从句，非谓语动词和各种固定句型，几乎每一个句子都是高级句型，读起来流畅自然。

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