There are at least two good reasons accounting for________. On(the)one hand,________. On the other hand,________is due to the fact that________. In addition,________is responsible for________. Maybe there are some other reasons to show________. But it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that________.I am sure my opinion is both sound and wellgrounded.
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以下是某英文报联合你校对你市(Kangming City)1998年到2010年家庭消费变化的图表,请据此写一篇短文,作为文字说明。词数120~150。
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2010. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has_been_changed,_too. 【此处应该使用现在完成时的主动形式has changed。】These graphs show the change clearly.
The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In_2010,_expenses_on_housing_rose_to_42_percent. 【在该句前应该使用While表示前后两种情况的对比。】Food and drink is the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In_2010,_the_figure_grew_by_30%.【在此句前应该添加Whereas表示对比,同时又与前面的while不同,显示用词表达的多样性。】As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28% in 2010.
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