2.他很努力，但却一无所获。

　　①Hard as he attempts, he has gained nothing.

　　②Hard as he tries, his efforts do not pay off.

　　③Although he attempts hard, his efforts are all in vain/useless.

　　④Although he works very hard, he has got nothing.

　　⑤However hard he works, he fails to find any fish.

　　3.他没有先观察自己的身边，否则他就能轻松的发现鱼群了。

　　①He doesn’t first observe the circumstance around him otherwise he is able to find a school of fish swimming nearby.

　　②A school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely ignores/neglects them.

　　③He doesn’t find a school fish swimming nearby because he doesn’t first observe the circumstance around him.

　　④If he first observed the circumstance around him, the fish swimming nearby should be discovered easily.

　　⑤A school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely turns a blind eye to them.

　　连句成篇（注意加过渡词语和过渡句）

　　①As is vividly described in the picture, a man on a boat , using a telescope, wants to find with great effort if there are some fish distantly. However hard he works, he fails to find any fish, for the net is still empty. Amusingly, it happens that a school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely turns a blind eye to them.

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