decided

　　having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought

　　getting

　　dollars

　　about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick.

　　when

　　Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible,

　　totally

　　more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without

　　being told∧. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.

　　to

　　advice

　　In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.

　　0n

　　myself

　　书面表达

　　One possible version:

　　Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

　　Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came and took the man to hospital. When everything was OK, she left for school.

　　Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Though there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, if you don’t offer your help when others are in trouble, how can you expect help from others when you are in trouble? Therefore, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?

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